Seconding a comment made by Stephen Hunt:

The change to paragraph B regarding the provisional ballot is not correct.  The permanent record does not occur when a provisional ballot is submitted by the voter.  It occurs when the electoral board accepts it and it is counted.  If the electoral board rejects the provisional ballot, it is as though the voter never voted.  Consequently it is as though there was never a permanent record.  I recommend that the language be changed to include the acceptance by the local electoral board

"or (iv) relinquishing possession of a completed provisional ballot envelope containing the ballot to the possession of an officer of election and the subsequent approval of that provisional ballot by the local electoral board. "